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1Stage Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 6:47 am

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~ Low-Res
~ Super Jump [thanx Realest ]
~ 2 loop kut BGMs included: Violent Death [from original stage], & Drugs~Violence [kut & kreated for this stage by ya boi Alpyne], setup for easy switching in tha .def file. might add sfx to'em at a later time.

read .def for more details & such


enjoy dem shitz.



Last edited by Alpyne_D on Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:02 pm; edited 1 time in total


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2Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 7:23 am

Nice, but its raining inside the factory?
Plus, the water splash seams to be syncronized, you should make it more random.
but nice work, I liked it.


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3Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:04 pm

I still hate those barrels lol


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4Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 8:24 pm

I think the concept is nice, and I really dig the music.

The rain on the inside is kinda iffy but you could get away with saying there's no roof or something lol. Otherwise ilu covered most of my thoughts on the rain, they could be a bit randomized just to make it a bit more realistic. You could make much better puddles with Squirlz, it looks like that's where the rain is from.

Overall blending on this could use a touch up as well, particularly:
The object on the left by kyo's feet:

Compared to the background it just doesn't look right. Maybe you could even consider adding more elements to the stage, particularly in the background? It feels really empty there. You could maybe cut the sky for more deltas or even add some clouds or something. Just anything else to spice up the BG.

The pipe steam was a nice touch, i dig that. But i think it appears too suddenly, perhaps use some fading in the beginning to make it look as if it's starting up?

Other than aesthetics it's pretty damn good. Solid music as always, not much error in the .sff or .def that I can see besides a few sprites being uncropped which isn't that big of a deal, clean coding and all.

Sorry I slacked on this man, opening mugen has been a task for me lately since i'm on this creator struggle. Seeing Newagers create stuff is always refreshing though so i had to check this out.


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5Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 9:38 pm

I like it so far.


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6Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Wed Apr 30, 2014 11:52 pm

The stage looks really nice, but I do have some complaints:
- The rain droplets could use some variation.
- I don't like the bright blue-ish background.
- The blue-ish background's delta could use some adjustments.

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7Stage Re: Shutdown Industrial Steel Factory on Thu May 01, 2014 11:16 am

thanx for tha feedback y'all, i appreciate it


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